My fingers are numb!

I have just changed (almost completely) the intro to the story. It took me about two hours to write, no joke.

And yet, I feel as if it is missing something. I keep having to remind myself that it is only a rough draft, I can go back and change it whenever I feel like it. I like very much the transition ending, and the stuff I added in the middle. If you have read my story (if you haven't go read it) then you'll be surprised by how different it has become.

The only reason it took me like two hours to put down on paper is because for one, I'm handwriting it, and because I keep getting little bouts of ADD (I don't actually have ADD) and IMing people on Facebook. That, and I got writer's block at the beginning, because I felt that the intro was weak. I kept looking at it and asking how I could change it. I got nothing until about half an hour after that. I think the change is for the better.

And my dear Ryan, I could NOT have done it without you.

What I have decided to do

I will leave my themeacy story up as a sneak preview of what will happen in my new story: Hope is a Thing of Feathers.
This blog will be used to update how the story is going. I will not be using computer programs to write it, nor will I be posting any of the story on Blogger. Ryan will be helping me with the story, too.

I have decided to do it this way, because if I ever decide to send it in to a publisher, I don't want the story up on the site for people to steal or to read freely. That's just dumb. I will take suggestions at all times.

Loves!